An Entire Email Filled With This

“We have also enabled functionality that will allow you to leverage a 3rd party patient engagement application to manage your personal health care information. Currently, the patient engagement application that communicates with our Electronic Health Record software is MyLinks.”

At least five hundred words of this drivel! It makes me tired to think of how much time it would take to make this right.Functionality. Really? As Eliot (internal link) would say, “Then how should I begin?”

By thomasfarley01

Business writer and graphic arts gadfly.

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