“That” is a deadening word used too often.
Here are before and after examples from a single article on Twitter. I think my corrections work. What do you think?
Twitter is taking another step forward in ensuring that its service is a safe place . . . .
Twitter is taking another step forward in ensuring its service is a safe place . . . .
The company today announced that it’s giving everyone . . . .
The company today announced it’s giving everyone
He acknowledged that Twitter hadn’t done enough . . . .
He acknowledged Twitter hadn’t done enough
